Nightmare Bring ya Ass

(-abari would send multiple needles each charged with fire and earth chakra that surrounded the needles heading towards nightmare at a high speed-)

*nightmare dodge by jump up in the air from the needles then shoot a water blase behind the needles to cool them down after make needles stop then fall down*


((is that good))


((doing more better))

let go im back to play

ok where you at

better now its time to work on grammar

Ok so let's get this thing so what's first huh ?

*nightmare dodge by jump up in the air from the needles then shoot a water blase behind the needles to cool them down after make needles stop then fall down*

with that sentence make it more understandable add commas periods and words to make it more readable

ok then

*Nightmare jumped into the sky dodging the needles after the needles flu past nightmare then used a water based magic attack to stop them nightmare then landed on the ground and looked up smiling*

how is that ?

O.o thats real good. just add some commas to it like you were doing this for homework in your english class

OK i love English class

((eh you are getting better))

ok thanks

OK this is quite the site here but nightmare you still need much more practice ok I'll help you out as well you know what they say the more the merrier.

ok i tie my best to do better

Ok then your getting way better then before now lets work on a proper jutsu list something basic. Now what type of energy your character will have

dark magic

Dark magic that's cool but its limited so keep that in mind.

now exactly what do u want to do with dark magic

1 fire attacks

2 water heals

3 ice expose

4 dark every thing

ummmmm that's not really answering the question, more specification necessary

i just did

all so dark swords and more weapons

okay....lets try it this way

1. fire attacks

Give some fire attacks, I.E. fireballs, flamethrower, something like that, and give an explanation of what they can do.


2. water heals

To what extent does it heal? Small cuts, little wounds like that?


3. ice expose

I don't have any idea what you mean here, so you need to do something about that,


4 dark everything

Just what does "everything" encompass? What can you do with it, attacks, offensive capabilities, defensive capabilities. This kinda information is necessary.

allow me to provide a simple example

League of the beggar's chi essence

-by channeling the chi type through his body he may fight with the style of a beggar from the league of the beggar clan which obtains the drunken boxing style. this gives increased agility, speed and technique (also known as accuracy)


if i need to simplify it further let me know

ok i will put what i want

1. i want to know light magic for make any thing to life and to know the opposites of dark

2. a magic power than summon thousands of swords to keep my foes off track

3.i want to have all level 1 dark and light magic

4.i want to turn my body to air from foes cant though me

yeaaaaaa can someone help with this part