magic powers

my magic powers:

1.energy shield: can block any thing that throw at me



2.the heaven unicorn: can shoot out laser out it horn



3.your soul in hell: that what in side of you can kill you



4.energy wings: fly 300 miles per second

explain each one

One, those all look WAAAAAY too powerful. At the very least for the rank you currently hold. Two, you have to explain what each one does in detail and how youre able to preform them. Example: Wind Cutter: I use my wind energy to manipulate the air around me into sharp knives that launch at the opponent. Other details that you might need to explain will be added one you update that much information.

I find 3 absolutely hilarious for some reason o.0...but i agree completely with Taz and toctys

Gig....I share in this hilarity for some reason too....I think it has something to do with how the guy is positioned....XD

Anyways, I agree with everyone else about needing detail....

Wow everyone of those but the laser sounds godly.

no your sheild cant block everything. (not even mine can)

you can not control the hellish and sinful parts of another soul

and no flying that fast. not even light goes that fast.

still need more explanation. use other lists as examples

Explain it here; Im not going to look in 4 other places for what belongs in this list anyway. And I agree with General. Tone EVERYTHING down. Nothing godly. All of that sounds godly. You cannot control another's soul, nor can you block -everything-. You cannot travel faster than the speed of light- its physically impossible. Plus, someone below a 3rd rank shouldnt even be close to the speed of light. Explain more about the unicorn shooting lasers, its too vague. None of this is nearly descriptive enough.

There's absolutely nothing wrong with this at all. As long as I can get the power to blink people out of existence, this is acceptable.

Bullshit.

hugs!!!!!!

what the hell you want from me

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Explain it here; Im not going to look in 4 other places for what belongs in this list anyway. And I agree with General. Tone EVERYTHING down. Nothing godly. All of that sounds godly. You cannot control another's soul, nor can you block -everything-. You cannot travel faster than the speed of light- its physically impossible. Plus, someone below a 3rd rank shouldnt even be close to the speed of light. Explain more about the unicorn shooting lasers, its too vague. None of this is nearly descriptive enough.

This.

this what my power

huh?

nightmare the general idea of your powers is all fine and dandy but they are WAY too powerful to start off with or even have here. think of it this way

by making this character you start off as an apprentice to a swordsmith and as your rank goes up the rank signifies how powerful you are among the experience you have learned as a character.

all you need to do is tone down the abilities powerwise until accepted

ok im a dark wizard so i know dark magic never light magic

ok i think i already had the idea your a dark wizard but with your abilities the level of power they have are too powerful let me put it in dark wizard terms

starting off = new dark wizard level powers

ranks = your level of power you gained among your experience as a character and spells you learned over time

at this rate if you start off with these that is IF you were allowed them logic would dictate your powers would destroy your body upon wake or birth

Also, complete sentences would be greatly beneficial to our ability to help you.

starting= so i will know new magic power

ranks= power will give me more and more dark

so i think that is ok for me

best to focus on one issue at a time and right now the overpowered skills is the most important. if he is overloaded he will possibly have trouble

NightMare wrote:

starting= so i will know new magic power

ranks= power will give me more and more dark

so i think that is ok for me

actually no they are STILL too powerful. lets start with the energy wings, lets say they did allow you to fly that speed. your body would shred to bits killing you

so what weapons i use then wand and swords or more

ok one last chance now focus and read slowly and clearly what it says below


the abilities of your magic is too powerful to start with or even have here. It must be toned down in order to be allowed

ok that all you can give me